For a first version, I loved the story's narrative, along with its artistic style.
Each of the characters shown seems interesting, although only one doesn't stand out enough, but it seems like he'll become more relevant later in the story.
As for the world structure, I can't say much. But that's because it's an introductory section and focused on the protagonist and his establishment in the current environment, his story, and the possible plot that will have weight within the visual novel.
Although, I feel like I was expecting something more than what was shown, and I think it's because I saw some showcases that were related to this? But you're probably saving that for later, so I'm looking forward to what you have in store for the next update.
Pretty good start! It’s a bit weird that the story section in this page talks about stuff not in the current build, but whatever.
The plot for now is intriguing enough to follow. Quite a lot of things happen in a short time, but it’s not too much yet.
The visual presentation is really good. The sprites and backgrounds work together and the CGs are well placed.
The audio part is not as well furnished. Most notably, the slow tense music continuing during the actiony escape sequence is a bit jarring. Sound effects could be nice, too.
In the end, the build finished earlier than I expected, but what’s there is good. Keep at it!
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Oh that was so good for a start, love me some SCP-inspired media I can't wait for the next update! :OOO
Thanks for reading! :3
For a first version, I loved the story's narrative, along with its artistic style.
Each of the characters shown seems interesting, although only one doesn't stand out enough, but it seems like he'll become more relevant later in the story.
As for the world structure, I can't say much. But that's because it's an introductory section and focused on the protagonist and his establishment in the current environment, his story, and the possible plot that will have weight within the visual novel.
Although, I feel like I was expecting something more than what was shown, and I think it's because I saw some showcases that were related to this? But you're probably saving that for later, so I'm looking forward to what you have in store for the next update.
Intresting read. Was funny when the mc calmed down as soon as he was given treats and headpats lol. Gonna follow
Pretty good start! It’s a bit weird that the story section in this page talks about stuff not in the current build, but whatever. The plot for now is intriguing enough to follow. Quite a lot of things happen in a short time, but it’s not too much yet. The visual presentation is really good. The sprites and backgrounds work together and the CGs are well placed. The audio part is not as well furnished. Most notably, the slow tense music continuing during the actiony escape sequence is a bit jarring. Sound effects could be nice, too. In the end, the build finished earlier than I expected, but what’s there is good. Keep at it!